Format : APSA
This is Political Econpmy tesks
I have peer review sugestions that should be applied to my paper. Please make it more clear as peer review suggest. Peer Review Suggestion I will write below, use it as guidline for the paper. Please do not add more pages , just work with what you have and please don’t use any reference just sources from the paper. I also add my thesis and question statment.:
Peer reviews:
1.Anonymous User, Apr 16 at 8:17pm
I think the intro paragraph would be clearer if the thesis statement was towards the beginning of the paragraph and then followed by context and a set up of how your paper will be structured/methodology. It is a bit confusing what your argument is with it at the end and preceded by citations and context. I think that if you made the first paragraph focused on your argument and outlining what your paper would address and and the second half of that paragraph include the background it would be cleaerer. Especially with the next small paragraph being more separated background. Merging the two together or separating your thesis and background entirely instead one paragraph a mix and one separate would work nicer. I would also add into your final intro sentance that youre analyzing “X” theories and then viewing them through the case studies of the three countries. The way it was set up was good to expect the three country paragraphs at the end but it felt weird to have the theory paragraph before it when it wasnt mentioned. That being said I would keep the order its in now and just add to the intro since the theory first gives good context to understand the analysis. Overall your papers logic makes sense, it just feels like more of a report of how things are rather than an argument or a prediction like the prompt asks for. While I don’t think this is a huge issue it might be something to look at. Some things you did really well is the way you’ve incorporated your sources throughout your paper. It’s very seamless and you use just the right amount to support your findings while still leaving room for your own analysis. Great work for a draft and I wish you the best of luck on your final paper.
!!!!!!Below research paper file and Methodology, Research question and Thesis, please cleared up the paper in the besster way possble.