Compare/contrast
a significant holiday. Has any holiday or event changed since you were a child?
What is it like now as an adult?
Comparison/Contrast Writing Assignment Parameters
For this assignment, you will compose a comparison and
contrast paper. Please review the chapter on this method of development in your
text. The page requirement is the same as your descriptive narrative, 1 ½ to 3
pages long in MLA format. Below is more information about compare and contrast.
Comparison and contrast are processes of identifying how
ideas, people, or things are alike (comparison) and how they are different (contrast).
Such assignments require you to move beyond mere description by thinking deeply
about the items being compared, identifying meaningful relationships between
them, and deciding which qualities are most significant. This process involves
evaluating, analyzing, and synthesizing your findings and presenting them in a
meaningful, interesting, and logical way.
Structure
Provide a clear introduction and thesis that not only spells
out the topic and the opinion but that also answers the question, “So what?”
Link your ideas or thoughts with effective transitions that
demonstrates the relationships between the subjects. Conclude the paper by
summarizing and analyzing the findings, once again reminding the reader of the
relationships you have noted between your subjects and/or categories.
Transitional Markers to Indicate Comparison and Contrast:
Transitional
markers are words or phrases that show the connections and relationships among
ideas. They are often placed at or near the beginning of a sentence or paragraph.
There are many such words, but here are some of the most useful terms:
Words to indicate comparison:
in comparison, similarly, likewise, in the same way, parallel to, correlate,
identically, akin to, consistent with, also, too, analogous to, correspondingly
Words to indicate contrast: in
contrast, however, on the other hand, nevertheless, although, counter to, on
the contrary, conversely, rather than, in opposition to, opposite of
Sample Introductory Paragraph
Below
is a sample of an introduction from a literary compare and contrast paper
written by a student: (Some of the terms
she uses to indicate comparison and contrast are in boldface.)
Because America itself is still a relatively young nation, |
Your
first paragraph is your introduction, and your last paragraph is your
conclusion. The introduction generally tells the reader what you will be
writing about and contains the thesis statement. The thesis statement
should clearly identify what you are comparing or contrasting. The conclusion
ties the entire essay together. What goes between these two paragraphs is
called the body paragraphs.
This paper will be evaluated for correct use of mechanics, spelling,
and punctuation as well as content, unity, organization, and so forth.
Use a variety of sentence structures. This paper will also be evaluated for
correct use of MLA format: Times New Roman 12-point font, double spaced, and so
forth.
Make sure the paper has a strong introduction with a clear thesis
statement. Your thesis statement is
not just the topic of your paper. It is your opinion about the topic. A narrow
topic + your opinion about the topic = an effective thesis statement. The
body of the paper should fully compare and/or contrast the chosen topic while
giving vivid examples/illustrations as support. Wrap up the paper with a
strong, significant conclusion.
The paper can be on any topic you find interesting to
compare or contrast (but, please, keep it PG-13). Likewise, it needs to have a
clear thesis: an opinion about the topic being compared and or contrasted. For
instance, if comparing a book version with a movie version, please state
clearly which one is superior and why. Do not straddle the fence. It will only
weaken your thesis and your entire paper. If your paper lacks a strong thesis, the
paper will not be successful.
Also, keep your readers in mind while writing. If it’s
boring to you, chances are it’s boring to readers. Make sure your paper answers the
questions, “So what? And why should I care?” If it’s not significant, why write
about it?
Seven possible topics are listed below for you to
choose from if you need clearer direction. There are also topics to select from
in your text book.
1. Compose
a contrast paper about something in your life that has changed with time and
familiarity.
2. Compare
or contrast people from different cultures, including married couples from
differing ethnic backgrounds, friendships, or traveling or moving to another
country or another state.
3. Compare/contrast
a book to its movie version.
4. Compare/contrast
a remake of a movie to the original version.
5. Compare/contrast
a person, place, or thing. Illustrate how it has either stayed the same
(compare) or how it has changed (contrast).
6. Compare/contrast
two literary characters in a story or novel.
7. Compare/contrast
a significant holiday. Has any holiday or event changed since you were a child?
What is it like now as an adult?
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Thesis |
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Organization Is the essay clearly organized into paragraphs? Does it |
Essay is not organized. Paragraphs are not evident or lack |
Essay is somewhat organized but lacks a clear controlling |
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Essay is organized and well structured (introduction, a Transitions are present and effectively direct readers. |
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Grammar and Mechanics |
Essay contains many errors, which are distracting to the |
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Essay contains a few errors, but they are not distracting |
Essay contains one or two minor errors. |
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Word Usage |
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Word usage is appropriate but lacks sophistication |
Word usage is appropriate but does not qualify as |
Word usage is appropriate for the essay and reflects |