Hi,I have simply finished the draft of my dissertation, which is a quantitative analysis,
including introduction, Literature review, methodology and findings and discussion.
I haven’t finish my abstract and conclusion parts,
but this is the first time I finish a 12000 words essay,
I have no experience, the logic is very confusing. I still need a teacher who could Re-aligning my content logic and revise the article, and give me some sensible advice.
My tutor is currently on holiday, and before he went on holiday he thought that this selection would not be easy to make significant (in fact the final data was indeed not significant), making what he thought was my suggestion that I do more descriptive statistics and focus on in-depth analysis.
My questions and demands are as follows:
1. My introduction and literature review are very confusing,please help me sort them out.
2. please help me to unify my whole structure and content logically, including introduction, literature review, and theoretical analysis and research hypothesis sections. (I haven’t finished the section on inserting citations)
3. does the logic need to be modified in my findings and discussion section?
3. does my conclusion section need to be expanded? How do I need to expand it? Please give some suggestions, thanks!
4. if there are any other problems, please don’t hesitate to point them out!
If it goes well, I haven’t finished my abstract and conclusion parts yet, so we can collaborate the other half next time！ Even the proofreading part!
We can discuss more detail in the chat. thank you.