1-Please make sure you use Harvard Reference
2-UK language, not the US
3-Third-person need to be used
4-Also In-text citation is needed for all information provided
5-Please try to follow the assignment brief information from the documents I attach.
Below is the feedback received from the University
Dear Danuta,
Thank you for submitting your coursework for the course “Contemporary Debates�.
Additional to the feedback in the text, more feedback is provided below.
Your work demonstrates a good understanding of the overall problem of health inequalities.
You only touch on government approaches, saying they promote equality but you have not mentioned how they are doing this.
In future, instead of describing what health inequalities there are, pick a few and see what the government is doing. The essay question already states that health inequalities are a major problem in the UK.
You have done a good job describing inequalities but your task was to discuss the government’s approaches. Consider implementing feedback from your lecturer. Read your essay with the question in mind and check if you have answered the question.
I attached the Assignment guidance, brief and the assignment I already submit and received feedback. Can you please read very carefully the information and feedback, this is my last chance of passing this assignment if no I won’t go into the next semester.
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