Rewring a submitted thesis to strengthen content .
reduce the number of objectives
chapter 3 needs more clarification on research methods chosen as somewhere it is mentioned qualitative,, in data collection is mentioned mixed-methods. The choice of research of method need to be clear, consistent, and realistic to the chosen topic
Consider the the title mentioned above to drive the content
Link between economic profitability and Sustainable finance must be made clearer and how they surpass the challenges of sustainable investments
Outcome of paper was not clear
Please make a suggestion to the title/topic of paper – does not have to be one mentioned above. Must relevant to what is being addressed in a creative way.
Sample 1-5 documents are examples of approved style of formatting/structuring by the institution.