Anthropology and Museum Studies essay – Literature Review rewrite and editing — Visiting the Museum: Audience Expectations, Perceptions and Practice in the Horniman Museum & Gardens

Please edit the draft of this Literature Review based on the comment on the side. Rewrite the unclear and repetitive sentence, add a few more previous audience research based on the Horniman Museum and Garden, and elaborate/solve the problems and questions made in the comment area. My research is based on the Horniman Museum and Garden, an Quantitative survey (questionnaires) was collected in June 2023, and also conducted observation research while I walked around in the Museum. I aimed to investigate the audience’s perspective and motivations… the comments are really clear and easy to understand, please read and rewrite the LR. I hope the writer can strengthen the original draft and proofread it as much as he/she can for me. That would be really helpful. For more details about my research and topic, I will send in the private chat.