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To prepare the final draft of Writing Project 1: Summary and Response, do the following:
Start with your Half Draft. Add a thesis statement to your introduction and write a response to your closed research theme reading, using the learning materials in Module 3 as a guide. Also, include a concluding paragraph.
Review feedback from your instructor (in Grades) and revise your draft based on this feedback.
Review the instructions for Writing Project 1 (in Module 3). Compare your draft to the instructions, looking for areas requiring further development. Revise your draft to address any issues that you found.
Finally, submit your final draft of Writing Project 1 here for instructor grading. Submit your draft as a Word document. You may also write a message to your instructor in the text box (optional).
Final Draft
An introductory paragraph that attempts to gain the interest of readers and introduces your closed research theme reading, and offers a thesis statement suggesting what your response to the closed research theme reading will be focused on
A thesis statement previewing your ” I Say” response to the closed research theme reading
A full and accurate summary of the closed research theme reading
A meaningful response, supported with evidence, to the closed research theme reading
A concluding paragraph
Revisions made based on the feedback you received from your instructor on the Half Draft (See the Grades link or consult your instructor for this feedback)
In-text citations of “They Say” summaries and quotations of the closed research theme reading and other sources, if you use any
APA or MLA style formatting, as specified by your instructor, with a References (APA) or Works Cited (MLA) page
Observation of the conventions of Standard Written English
Minimum 750 words for the final draft (References or Works Cited list does not count in the minimum word-count requirement)
See the assessment rubric at the bottom of this page for an understanding of how your Final Draft will be graded.
and here is the Instructors comments
A nice job so far, and your writing is strong. My main suggestions going into the final draft would be that you deal more directly with your source article, and you make sure that you cite everything in proper MLA format within the body of the paper. Keep in mind it’s not enough to just mention the author; it has to be done in the official way. Also, you’re a little bit quote heavy here, so it might be a good idea if you do a little bit more paraphrasing and a little less quoting. Overall, a great start.