1. Revise the final year project(FYP) based on the professor’s feedback.
2. Adjust the formatting.
3. Provide examples to support the content.
4. Ensure proper grammar and conherence of sentences.
Please use Word to summit the FYP.
Here is the professor’s feedback:
1/ The headings and sub-headings in the part of Literature Review should be bold and standardized the format
2/ The part of Discussion was not so obvious, you need to find some relevant information to support your findings
3/ Too long for your conclusion without any supportive information
Areas of strength:
1/ Well-structured presentation with clear introduction and table of content
2/ Detail and reasonable Methodology, with clear research process
3/ The data was presented clearly with explanation and justification
Overall:
Generally, you are able to fulfill the criteria of the project. You tried to find out lots of academic journals and information to support your point. The data was presented clearly with justification for the findings.
There is still room for improvement in the part of Literature Review and Discussion 2nd Marker Comments :
Areas of strength :
1/ Provide potential evidence to support your point of view
2/ Some relevant journals were found in the part of Literature and the coverage was reasonable
3/ Data was presented
3/ Data was presented
Areas for improvement :
1/ Inconsistent format such as font size were found in the paper
2/ Improper format of in-text citation
3/ Referencing may show inaccuracies or inconsistencies
Overall:
Evaluative points could be more extensive and systematic. Improve your writing skill as some of the sentences is unclear and difficult to understand.
Evaluative points could be more extensive and systematic. Improve your writing skill as some of the sentences is unclear and difficult to understand.