How does leadership work during times of organizational change; what is the role of strategic human resources?

This is a group project, and my group submitted this essay which is the attached Word Document. The professor provided feedback which I have inserted into the Word Document using the comment function. 
Please address each comment as best you can. YOU ONLY NEED TO ADDRESS THE AREAS OF THE PAPER THAT HAVE COMMENTS ON THEM. The rest of the essay is simply provided for context. If you cannot view the comments let me know and I will work with you to send them to you in another format. I have also attached two PDFs which should provide some context for the assignment.

Primary objective & Purpose of the assignment

The primary objective is to examine an organization’s change process through the eyes of
Human Resources leadership. The HAT is an exploratory paper. The primary purpose of this
assignment is to conduct research and learn something new about the nexus between
leadership, change management, and human resource management. The point of the
exploratory essay is to ask an inquiry question and find out as much as possible to answer the
question(s). Using communities of practice (your groups) as a method of sensemaking, groups
will then write about the inquiry and findings. Primary objective & Purpose
The primary objective is to examine an organization’s change process through the eyes of
Human Resources leadership. The HAT is an exploratory paper. The primary purpose of this
assignment is to conduct research and learn something new about the nexus between
leadership, change management, and human resource management. The point of the
exploratory essay is to ask an inquiry question and find out as much as possible to answer the
question(s). Using communities of practice (your groups) as a method of sensemaking, groups
will then write about the inquiry and findings.

Are you struggling with your paper? Let us handle it - WE ARE EXPERTS!

Whatever paper you need - we will help you write it

Get started

Starts at $9 /page

How our paper writing service works

It's very simple!

  • Fill out the order form

    Complete the order form by providing as much information as possible, and then click the submit button.

  • Choose writer

    Select your preferred writer for the project, or let us assign the best writer for you.

  • Add funds

    Allocate funds to your wallet. You can release these funds to the writer incrementally, after each section is completed and meets your expected quality.

  • Ready

    Download the finished work. Review the paper and request free edits if needed. Optionally, rate the writer and leave a review.