I worte the majorty of the thesis, however, I would like you to improve certain areas and add more. I have about 7 000 words but would like that to be around 8 000 or 9 000 (more is also fine if it makes sense to add, but you do not need to write 10 000 words!).
The areas I would like improvement are the following
– Intorudction: ( IF NEEDED )Adding more litterature , or restructuing, or improving the explanation the research gap.
– Litterature review: I would like you to add more litterature that pertains to the research and possibly improve the text if needed.
– Theoretical Framwork: If needed, add more concepts that can guide the research, but mainly restructuringand improving the text by maybe adding more litterature from the litterature review.
– Discussion: Improve by relating the finings to more litterature from the litt. review and theoretical framwork
– Conclusion: Write a conclusion based on the findings and discussion.