“IN WHAT WAYS MIGHT THE CRIMINAL JUSTICE SYSTEM IN ENGLAND AND WALES BETTER RESPOND TO VICTIMS’ FAMILIES?” Critically discuss with reference to current research, policy and practice.

July 8, 2023July 8, 2023 Discipline: Sociology

hey, this essay received 38/100, not good enough here is the feedback it received below, I need a pass thanks

Content
You make some important points but they are not clearly articulated and, in some cases, the claims you make are inaccurate.
You need to explain your points in greater detail, which would also enable you to develop the essay conceptually, as it is currently very descriptive.

There is too little cited evidence here, with lots of unsubstantiated claims made.

Line of argument
The line of argument is very unclear, which is related to the writing and use of inappropriate words.

Structure and organisation
The essay has an introduction and conclusion, and coherent paragraphing inbetween

Presentation
Some of your word choices are strange, which affects the readability of your writing.

Referencing
6 references is not sufficient for an essay at this level.

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