The thesis consists of 6 chapters in total.
1. Introduction
2. Theoretical framework
3. Research Methodology
4. X Results
5. Conclusions
6. Recommendations
I currently wrote first 3 chapters which is Research plan. However, the quality is very low and the storyline is not clear. I have comments from my advisor on my document you can have a look.
I would like to ask you to edit or rewrite research plan (chapter 1-3) with clear storyline following the comments and guidline I provided. (graphs and visuals are needed to have clear overview)
*problem analysis needs to be clearly fixed.
*you can change main research question and sub-questions
* sub-questions needs to be backed up with theories from chapter two
* you can change the theories to make the story clear
* guideline for each chapter is provided in Amsib guideline document (Appendix 1 and 2)
-Deadlines-
Chapter 1-3, 4 (sub-question 1) – 25th August
Chapter 4-6 – 18th September
I can also provide the thesis sample if you needed
Please have a close look and let me know if you are confident to proceed the work. Thank you