Hello,
The Masters Thesis I have sent requires some improvements and editing.
Please note the title has now changed from
Project Management Critical Success Factors of “Renewable Energy” Entering “Australia”
and now more specific to South Australia
to
Project Management Critical Success Factors of “Renewable Energy” Entering “South Australia”
Notes:
a) Could you look at comments in right hand-side column as made by Author and respond and adjust to what is required
b) Focus more on South Australia
c) Focus on Risk factors, what are they, mitigation factors/strategy, risk matrix etc.
d) Update and substitute any newer references where possible, moreso if possible remove and subsitute any old refrences such as 2001, 2003 etc.
e) Apply if relevant references given under
“Add reference to read”
Look at and add the 5 references if relevant
and any other relevant references
e) Thesis length 9000 words
f) when adding any new references in document highlight with a different colour
– add reference to list of references – highlight with a different colour
g) any changes, amendments – please highlight with a colour
h) Keepp to rules as applied in Format and Structure