So the topic is about a story we read in class and we have to apply a theory to it. I already made a first draft but it wasn’t that good. I can provide the citations as well as the first draft to give a better idea to what I need done.

August 1, 2023August 1, 2023 Discipline: English

I need these for sure
• Analysis (thesis applies theory to chosen story, evidence/quotes analyzed)
• Integration of Sources (2 Scholarly + 1 Primary, Discourse Templates evident)
• Clarity, Organization, & MLA Style


At one point we had to make a Prospectus that good feedback. I’ll send all I can.

Also, here’s the feedback I got on my first draft 

“You have the skeleton of your essay here, the headings and sections, but at this stage of the research process, we needed more meat. With only one identified quote from a source, we needed more, developing the body of the essay in other words with quotes from Ashcroft in your Theory section, and quotes from the story and from the source on your game in your Analysis section, the latter section organized by topic sentences / main points derived from the thesis (as seen in our Specimens) instead of starting with a quote or a source. For quotes, we also need MLA in-text citations such as (Ashcroft 5). 

In your intro, let’s capitalize the name of your theory. 

Let’s bold the headings.”


Here are the sources

Murray, Soraya. Landscapes of Empire in Metal Gear Solid V: The Phantom Pain. 22 Sept. 2018, search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&AuthType=shib&db=edsgao&AN=edsgcl.557932878&site=eds-live&custid=northwest.


Bill Ashcroft. Edward Said and the Post-Colonial. Nova, 2020. EBSCOhost, search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&AuthType=shib&db=nlebk&AN=2699110&site=eds-live.r


Kochai, Jamil Jan. “‘Playing Metal Gear Solid V: The Phantom Pain,’ by Jamil Jan Kochai.” The New Yorker, 30 Dec. 2019, www.newyorker.com/magazine/2020/01/06/playing-metal-gear-solid-v-the-phantom-pain.





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