Please see below for comments on paper as well as the paper itself attached with a “CRAAP” Tool.
From the start of your paper:
please review your APA 7th ed. title page format for placement on page and missing items
https://apastyle.apa.org/style-grammar-guidelines/paper-format/title-page
**Background – section identified by heading….. ? Introduction
”Labor induction is primarily considered when” – labor of what population?
“This puts pregnant women above 18 years who utilize induction methods for labor at an increased risk” – is this biased?
perhaps your approach should be to identify the population and then explain the two strategies being reviewed
**PICOT question – no section identified by heading, please correct for final SR
what is your PICOT question?
**Purpose section – section identified by heading
“This paper will compare different evidence-based literature research to establish the
prevalence of infections” – this reads very biased…. you should be objective in your initial research, summarization, and analysis, then you can have an opinion
**Lit Search strategy- no section identified by heading… please correct for final SR
please review prior feedback r/t personal pronouns in APA
I found a paragraph that would benefit from numbers……” ” around the search terms
**Eval of lit – section identified by heading
subheading for intervention strategy is used, subheading for comparison strategy is used
feedback offered in Lit Search/CRAAP assignment, not addressed “Please do not use ”the article”, you are not reviewing articles from the Golf magazine, rather you are reviewing scholarly studies/original research.
please use the authors of this study, this study, consider also the research, or the researchers found, or in a study by researchers names (date).”
cite by author (date), this is how your reference page is set up and how one would look for your source
what is an adequate sample? state this number
add specifics – location, age………..assessment method your summaries are vague
statements like academic standing, The study method is appropriate could be placed in your analysis paragraphs, not summary
**Analysis of studies-
“Each study focuses” – CITE your studies by author, for example “All three”-cite by author (date) or (Smith, 2022; Rug, 2021)…
okay capture of similarities, differences, consider adding data versus words, for example, what is a therapeutic response in numbers?
Conclusion – identified by a heading
”Despite this, there is no significant increase in infections in women that
choose labor induction methods.” – show the numbers here, add data
References – identified by a heading
missing bold title
General comments:
Your draft included the following sections, with headings:
Background
PICOT Question
Purpose of the paper
Literature Search Strategy
Evaluation of Literature with subheadings for Intervention Strategy and Comparison Strategy
Conclusion of Findings
References
Your final SR will add the following with headings:
Implementing Change in Healthcare
Barriers to Change
Summary