i have attached the annotated bibliography as a guide
here are some guidelines;
Thesis statement:
A thesis statement tells the reader two things; what the paper is going to argue and how it is going to make that argument. It should be clear and concise and be the starring attraction of the first page of the paper.
Content:
Does the body of your paper match the thesis statement? Are you making your points clearly and concisely? If alternative views exist have you acknowledged them? Does the preponderance of evidence you present support your thesis statement? Is the paper well argued?
Writing:
Is the paper well written? A couple of simple tips. Paragraphs should contain one idea and evidence to support that idea only. In a double -spaced essay, paragraphs that are a page long or more either contain more than one idea or are repeating the supporting evidence.
Is the paper grammatically sound? Does the paper read well? Try reading the paper aloud or have a friend read it. if some sentences sound confusing, there is likely a grammatical glitch in it. Try saying it differently orally and if that sounds better chances are the syntax is correct.
Conclusion:
How much of your thoughts can be found in the conclusion? The conclusion is the opportunity for you to show your views. Why is this topic important? Why does it matter to you and why should it matter to the reader? There should be no big surprises in the conclusion, just more of yourself.
Sources and references:
Are the references varied? Is there a mix of peer reviewed and contemporary analysis (newspapers or periodicals for example). This is a Canadian politics course so we should expect some analysis of recent events in the area you are studying. Some older sources are okay if you are putting things in historical perspective. Otherwise, try to use more recent studies/articles.